tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6273102641561865756.post1220054578219588272..comments2023-05-08T05:39:12.444-07:00Comments on Jots, Thoughts and Tittles: My First Kiss--chapter 25Kimberly Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08634112435898967496noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6273102641561865756.post-65372500397839697852012-07-08T20:08:07.183-07:002012-07-08T20:08:07.183-07:00Thank you :)Thank you :)Kimberly Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08634112435898967496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6273102641561865756.post-60523461341668547842012-06-29T22:12:36.786-07:002012-06-29T22:12:36.786-07:00I really like this chapter and think it is well wr...I really like this chapter and think it is well written. The only suggestion I have is an exclamation point after the "Yeah right" in the first paragraph. It seems more appropriate to me, but maybe not.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14973654729792470483noreply@blogger.com